Post by A n u y on Mar 4, 2008 21:06:58 GMT -5
Branded;
Chocolatepaw
Fought;
6 Moons
Seen a;
She-cat
Born in;
Stormclan
Ranking;
Apprentice
If you were to look at me;
You would see, a small cat with fur dark brown like the forests soft earth.
As if a Starclan warrior already her fur glows with a sheen. It's soft like new grass and short. She would move with her head held high, beaming with the pride of an eagle and the arrogance of a crow. Strong as a tree, with claws sharp as thistles handed down to her by Spottedclan. The wind she would race as it nips at her paws, small and delicate. With eyes like the sky, hard as ice as they watch you.
Under the fur;
Chocolatepaw is Very opinionated. She can be rather blunt because of this and states things as she sees them. She's not one to dummy things down or soften her tongue for any cat. She is often sarcastic and annoying. She is smart though and although she doesn't always think be for she acts dose consider her choices in life carefully. She struts around with the appearance that she knows she's better then you. Her pride can be infuriating and it comes along with a bunch of stubbornness. If you can get threw all that Chocolatepaw really is kind at heart and if you break threw her outer shell she will condole in you all her problems and trust you, don't screw it up.
What I have been threw;
Chocolatepaw was born a single kit to Dustheart, a light brown Queen. Her foster father was Blackthorn a rather gentle tom who sported a totally black pelt and ice blue eyes like Chocolatekits'. Chocolatepaw loved them unconditionally but would find herself alone often. At that young age she didn't find it strange that her mother was never around and that she spent many nights with only her foster father to keep her company. She never noticed the arguments that would erupt between her parents.
Then one night her mother didn't come back and she didn't come back the next night either. Worried Chocolatekit begged her Blackthorn to go out and look for her. But Blackthorn only looked away shaking his head sadly. Chocolatekit decided it was up to her. She was certain something bad had happened to Dustheart and it was her to save her mother.
Chocolatekit set out. following Dusthreat sent all the way to the rogue border. There the dusty brown queens sent mixed with another more tangy sent. Chocolatekit was undeterred. She followed it to a little camp where she found 4 other kits playing gleefully. Her paws hurt and she was tied so Chocolate kit joined them. At first they teased her then they ignored her and led chocolate kit to the nursery. Inside the little kit got the shock of her life. Her very own mother sat there licking another tom, the same one Chocolatekit had scented at the boarder.
Her mother smiled and told Chocolatekit she'd be living here from now on. That night restless in her new home and wanting to return to Her clan Chocolatekit left. She didn't make it far before she met her mothers snarling face. The queen slashed open Chocolatekits nose and roughly picked her up, bringing her Back to the little camp.
Thats when blackthorn arrived. the dark warrior attacked Dustheart. The shrieks of rage and hate range around the clearing. Chocolatekit tried to block them out but she couldn't. Desperately she begged them to stop fighting. They wouldn't listen. As tears streamed from Chocolatekits eyes another cat came. The tom Dustheart had been licking. He attacked and they over powered Blackthorn. They mawed him. Breaking his legs, making it so he couldn't get away. Chocolatekit tried to look away they laughed and finally Dustheart killed him.
Chocolatekit ran. As fast as she could away. She made it to border before she collapsed and was found by a patrol that night.
Later she would meet shrewfang. Dusthearts mother. She told Chocolatekit of her mother and, the tom who had killed blackthorn. He and Dustheart had fallen in love and had kits. Chocolatekit had gotten sick and Dustheart had taken her back to the clan. That was when Blackthorn had stepped in. He tried to convince Dustheart to bring all the kits back. To there rightful clan and fought to keep Chocolatekit. In the end he had died for it to. Chocolatkit felt betrayed and shut off everything. She developed a outer shell of cold mocking. She would never let any cat betray her again.
"Sometimes we put up walls not to keep others out. But to see who cares enough to break in. . ."
Passy: Morning
Chocolatepaw
Fought;
6 Moons
Seen a;
She-cat
Born in;
Stormclan
Ranking;
Apprentice
If you were to look at me;
You would see, a small cat with fur dark brown like the forests soft earth.
As if a Starclan warrior already her fur glows with a sheen. It's soft like new grass and short. She would move with her head held high, beaming with the pride of an eagle and the arrogance of a crow. Strong as a tree, with claws sharp as thistles handed down to her by Spottedclan. The wind she would race as it nips at her paws, small and delicate. With eyes like the sky, hard as ice as they watch you.
Under the fur;
Chocolatepaw is Very opinionated. She can be rather blunt because of this and states things as she sees them. She's not one to dummy things down or soften her tongue for any cat. She is often sarcastic and annoying. She is smart though and although she doesn't always think be for she acts dose consider her choices in life carefully. She struts around with the appearance that she knows she's better then you. Her pride can be infuriating and it comes along with a bunch of stubbornness. If you can get threw all that Chocolatepaw really is kind at heart and if you break threw her outer shell she will condole in you all her problems and trust you, don't screw it up.
What I have been threw;
Chocolatepaw was born a single kit to Dustheart, a light brown Queen. Her foster father was Blackthorn a rather gentle tom who sported a totally black pelt and ice blue eyes like Chocolatekits'. Chocolatepaw loved them unconditionally but would find herself alone often. At that young age she didn't find it strange that her mother was never around and that she spent many nights with only her foster father to keep her company. She never noticed the arguments that would erupt between her parents.
Then one night her mother didn't come back and she didn't come back the next night either. Worried Chocolatekit begged her Blackthorn to go out and look for her. But Blackthorn only looked away shaking his head sadly. Chocolatekit decided it was up to her. She was certain something bad had happened to Dustheart and it was her to save her mother.
Chocolatekit set out. following Dusthreat sent all the way to the rogue border. There the dusty brown queens sent mixed with another more tangy sent. Chocolatekit was undeterred. She followed it to a little camp where she found 4 other kits playing gleefully. Her paws hurt and she was tied so Chocolate kit joined them. At first they teased her then they ignored her and led chocolate kit to the nursery. Inside the little kit got the shock of her life. Her very own mother sat there licking another tom, the same one Chocolatekit had scented at the boarder.
Her mother smiled and told Chocolatekit she'd be living here from now on. That night restless in her new home and wanting to return to Her clan Chocolatekit left. She didn't make it far before she met her mothers snarling face. The queen slashed open Chocolatekits nose and roughly picked her up, bringing her Back to the little camp.
Thats when blackthorn arrived. the dark warrior attacked Dustheart. The shrieks of rage and hate range around the clearing. Chocolatekit tried to block them out but she couldn't. Desperately she begged them to stop fighting. They wouldn't listen. As tears streamed from Chocolatekits eyes another cat came. The tom Dustheart had been licking. He attacked and they over powered Blackthorn. They mawed him. Breaking his legs, making it so he couldn't get away. Chocolatekit tried to look away they laughed and finally Dustheart killed him.
Chocolatekit ran. As fast as she could away. She made it to border before she collapsed and was found by a patrol that night.
Later she would meet shrewfang. Dusthearts mother. She told Chocolatekit of her mother and, the tom who had killed blackthorn. He and Dustheart had fallen in love and had kits. Chocolatekit had gotten sick and Dustheart had taken her back to the clan. That was when Blackthorn had stepped in. He tried to convince Dustheart to bring all the kits back. To there rightful clan and fought to keep Chocolatekit. In the end he had died for it to. Chocolatkit felt betrayed and shut off everything. She developed a outer shell of cold mocking. She would never let any cat betray her again.
"Sometimes we put up walls not to keep others out. But to see who cares enough to break in. . ."
Passy: Morning
